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Avatar Nation return to pandora
http://avatar-nation.forummotion.com/forum.htm
Here is the URL to return to pandora.
MAKE SURE TO HIT THE URL NOT THE PICTURE
Here is the URL to return to pandora.
MAKE SURE TO HIT THE URL NOT THE PICTURE
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Re: Avatar Nation return to pandora
The story takes place in the year 2154 on Pandora, a lush, Earth-like moon in the Alpha Centauri star system.The RDA corporation is mining a valuable mineral called unobtanium. Administrator Parker Selfridge heads the mining operation of the RDA colony, which has a private security force called Sec-Ops.Pandora's atmosphere is toxic to humans, forcing them to use breathing masks.
Now The scientist like Grace augustine ,Jake Sully , Norm spellman and many more help aginst the fight ..... on pandora have to find a way to keep the Peace ..
Come and Join the fight aginst the Humanoid chosse your race ...Or suffer the conciquences ...
1st in comand .... NORM SPELLMAN /Tsu'tey
2nd Jake Sully
3 ...UNknown
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http://avatar-nation.forummotion.com/forum.htm
Now The scientist like Grace augustine ,Jake Sully , Norm spellman and many more help aginst the fight ..... on pandora have to find a way to keep the Peace ..
Come and Join the fight aginst the Humanoid chosse your race ...Or suffer the conciquences ...
1st in comand .... NORM SPELLMAN /Tsu'tey
2nd Jake Sully
3 ...UNknown
Mod Dr.Grace ...
http://avatar-nation.forummotion.com/forum.htm
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Re: Avatar Nation return to pandora
MAKE SURE TO HIT THE URL NOT THE PICTURE
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Re: Avatar Nation return to pandora
That's a lot of words. I'm too lazy to read it, but from glances it looks like a summary of the movie.
If someone didn't see the movie and didn't know the plot, it dosen't seem likely that they would join until after they did, and once they did they wouldn't really need a summary now would they?
Now, I'm not any expert advertiser, but it seems that that much writing wouldn't make someone want to join, especially if it just a long essay of what they already now. For your best intrests, I suggest being a bit creative and coming up with your own new plot to summerize, and only in one or to paragraphs...
If someone didn't see the movie and didn't know the plot, it dosen't seem likely that they would join until after they did, and once they did they wouldn't really need a summary now would they?
Now, I'm not any expert advertiser, but it seems that that much writing wouldn't make someone want to join, especially if it just a long essay of what they already now. For your best intrests, I suggest being a bit creative and coming up with your own new plot to summerize, and only in one or to paragraphs...
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Yah, that's quite alot to read.... and you just copy-pasted it.
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ok here gose ...........
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Re: Avatar Nation return to pandora
The story takes place in the year 2154 on Pandora, a lush, Earth-like moon in the Alpha Centauri star system.The RDA corporation is mining a valuable mineral called unobtanium. Administrator Parker Selfridge heads the mining operation of the RDA colony, which has a private security force called Sec-Ops.Pandora's atmosphere is toxic to humans, forcing them to use breathing masks.
Now The scientist like Grace augustine ,Jake Sully , Norm spellman and many more help aginst the fight ..... on pandora have to find a way to keep the Peace ..
Come and Join the fight aginst the Humanoid chosse your race ...Or suffer the conciquences ...
1st in comand .... NORM SPELLMAN /Tsu'tey
2nd Jake Sully
3 ...UNknown
Mod Dr.Grace ...
http://avatar-nation.forummotion.com/forum.htm
Now The scientist like Grace augustine ,Jake Sully , Norm spellman and many more help aginst the fight ..... on pandora have to find a way to keep the Peace ..
Come and Join the fight aginst the Humanoid chosse your race ...Or suffer the conciquences ...
1st in comand .... NORM SPELLMAN /Tsu'tey
2nd Jake Sully
3 ...UNknown
Mod Dr.Grace ...
http://avatar-nation.forummotion.com/forum.htm
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Re: Avatar Nation return to pandora
*achem*
Remember that chat you and Matt had about plagerism...
Remember that chat you and Matt had about plagerism...
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yea why I put most of that in my own words
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