Erika Price - Daughter of Poseidon

[ejprice]

Name: Erika Price
Age: 11
God Parent: Poseidon
Mortal Family: Astridah and Rob Price
Years in Camp: 2
Brief History: Has been a trouble maker since she was 3 when she somehow made tons of water flood her house. She lives in Farmington, MI. She grew up swimming. She's African American, British, Swedish, and German.
Physical Appearance: Athlectic, black eyes and hair. Light tan skin
Personality: Very funny, talented, smart and faster than Michael Phelps. She hates Athena, Apollo and Zeus's children. Loves Percy Jackson. Loves to be in the water.
Fatal Flaw: Overly leaderly. Loves to be the leader, she's a great leader, yet it gets in the way of the important things now.
Talents: Plays some instruments, swims a lot (for 2 hours each day)
Weapons: Sword, bow and arrows, and shield
Other: A great friend

[GeneralArin]

We have way too many daughters of Poseiden... Sorry, but try another god.

As some base information about the different sections, if you've been at camp a while, you need a base thing on how you got to camp and life since arriving.

For personallity, tell us more about the inner workings, not just a list of likes and dislikes. How fast you swim doesn't have anything to do with personality. That's an ability. Tell us how your character deals with people, stress, and being alone.

Fatal Flaw doesn't make much sense with how it's worded, though the actual flaw is alright if your character's one that always 'needs' to be in charge, and won't let others take charge. This should tie into your personality, so it would make sense that your character would also be a bolder, take-charge sort of character.

The talent should be something that isn't inherently obvious, as in a stock power.
Then, that thing you put in "Other" would be better fit into the personality.

[JaylerDiAngelo]

Name: First and Last Name: Jayler Di Angelo Turner (Jayler Turner)
Age: 18
God Parent: Hades
Mortal Family: First and Last Name/s: None that are known, mother died in Child birth.
Years in Camp: Since she was 15
Brief History: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!:

Jayler Di Angelo Turner grew up with an adoptive father, Rabastan Evans. She was really close to him. She was first suspended from school when she was only 7 and ever since then she has been getting in trouble. When she started high school she was a true troublemaker that got all the attention. She was expelled from quiet a number of schools and Rabastan had finally had it out with her. When she was 14 he had had it with her behaviour and ended up hitting her in the face and slamming her against a wall. Jayler got a broken collar bone and luckily that was all. When she was 15 she was taken to Camp Half-Blood and met a guy named Luke Castellan. After a while they became best friends. Ever since she turned 17 and now 18 she has been having trouble with the gods, as she is still getting in trouble but now even worse.
Physical Appearance: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!:
Jayler is quiet athletic with defined abs with quiet a few scars on her torso. Her messy dark hair which goes just below her shoulders sometimes fall in front of her silver grey eyes which can be annoying. She is quiet pale but it apears to suit her. She is quiet tall, around 5'8.
Personality: At least 4 sentences. Be sure to include details!
Jayler is quiet a confusing and complex person from afar and keeps more to herself than anything. She is very short tempered and her behaviour makes her the most unpredictable. Jayler normally acts in the moment, she doesn't plan things out she just wings it. She tends to be very protective of the few people she does trust. She is not the sort of person that will look you in the eyes and talk about your feelings, but she is the type to kill for you
Fatal Flaw: Anger. She has problems with anger alot. She also is taking a drug (Steroids) when they aren't per-scripted. Her anger and the drugs combined are a very bad combination, causing her to act out.
Talents: She is very talented in fighting and empathy. She is also good at knowing what people are thinking or planning which gives her an advantage. The steroids also give her more strength.
Weapons: Sword and a pocket knife

[Guest]

First of all, this post belongs in a separate topic. And a few heads up;
You really should make this longer if you really want it approved. If this is the longest you can give us, then consider another parent. We already have an active Hades boy and an on and off Hades girl. Unless if your app is amazing, I don't see a huge chance of you getting accepted. Also: Luke is dead. This is after the titan war, after everything; PJO and HOO.

[©razy Dude]

And we don't allow sons/daughters of Canon characters. Atleast from what I was told by Jake.

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