Marek Novak
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Marek Novak
Name: Marek Novak
Age:16
God Parent: Kratos (Κράτος), spirit of strength, might, power and sovereign rule
Mortal Family: Anezka Novak mother Deceased
Vondra Novak sister
Years in Camp:0
Brief History:
Marek Novak was morn in Iowa and is of Czechoslovakian decent.
Kratos met Anazka while she was serving in the US army. they both fell in love and soon Marek was born.
after the child was born Kratos left and was never seen again
Marek was raised buy his sister Vonda a strong woman after
his mother was killed in a the 1st war in Iraq.
this destroyed Marek's belief system.
He became a history student in University of Hradec Králové and studied the way of chivalry and medieval warfare and became obsessed buy the code of honor.
This only lasted till his sister died in the recent war in Iraq.
he was left alone.
He found his sisters diary and discovered his Godly heritage.
Upon discovering his father was a god of war he blamed him for her death.
his rage and lust for vengeance upon the gods drew the titan army to him. Marek hates the Gods and believes they are not the true rullers and there time has come.
Physical Appearance: he is in tremendous physical shape. and will constantly strive to improve him self.
he has dark brown hair shaven into a Mohawk.
Personality: Marek is completely loyal to any cause he views as true. he is almost sycophantic in his loyalty.
Fatal Flaw: Marek's loyalty will blind him to others, his code of
honor will never allow him to act against his beliefs.
Talents: ironically Marek is a talented knitter and drummer.
Weapons: Flammar Zweihander named buřič firebrand
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/38/Flammar_Zweihander_by_Wendelin_Boeheim.jpg
Other:
Marek's body produces very little fatigue poisons allowing him to remain active for hours before tiring.
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Age:16
God Parent: Kratos (Κράτος), spirit of strength, might, power and sovereign rule
Mortal Family: Anezka Novak mother Deceased
Vondra Novak sister
Years in Camp:0
Brief History:
Marek Novak was morn in Iowa and is of Czechoslovakian decent.
Kratos met Anazka while she was serving in the US army. they both fell in love and soon Marek was born.
after the child was born Kratos left and was never seen again
Marek was raised buy his sister Vonda a strong woman after
his mother was killed in a the 1st war in Iraq.
this destroyed Marek's belief system.
He became a history student in University of Hradec Králové and studied the way of chivalry and medieval warfare and became obsessed buy the code of honor.
This only lasted till his sister died in the recent war in Iraq.
he was left alone.
He found his sisters diary and discovered his Godly heritage.
Upon discovering his father was a god of war he blamed him for her death.
his rage and lust for vengeance upon the gods drew the titan army to him. Marek hates the Gods and believes they are not the true rullers and there time has come.
Physical Appearance: he is in tremendous physical shape. and will constantly strive to improve him self.
he has dark brown hair shaven into a Mohawk.
Personality: Marek is completely loyal to any cause he views as true. he is almost sycophantic in his loyalty.
Fatal Flaw: Marek's loyalty will blind him to others, his code of
honor will never allow him to act against his beliefs.
Talents: ironically Marek is a talented knitter and drummer.
Weapons: Flammar Zweihander named buřič firebrand
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/38/Flammar_Zweihander_by_Wendelin_Boeheim.jpg
Other:
Marek's body produces very little fatigue poisons allowing him to remain active for hours before tiring.
Picture
Last edited by Fred on Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:00 pm; edited 17 times in total
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Re: Marek Novak
Definitely need more on the bio
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yeah i was a bit rushed i did it an the public library
iv edited her now.
iv edited her now.
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Re: Marek Novak
In your bio, please include something about how she got recruited into the Titan Army.
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done aaand done
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Not to keen on the powers thing... and can you give more detail depth to the bio?
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in not sure what else more i can add?
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I'd say the bio's mainly individual thoughts. If you could unify them more, it would work better.
What exactly are her powers? I think I missed it. I wasn't quite sure what the sword was supposed to do. If it does what I think it does, it's rather over powered. You know, you don't need a super cool weapon with powers, neither of my characters have powerful weapons. The weapons is more for the usual weapon they use, for example Mark would have simply his sword, custom made but lacking in the powers sector.
What exactly are her powers? I think I missed it. I wasn't quite sure what the sword was supposed to do. If it does what I think it does, it's rather over powered. You know, you don't need a super cool weapon with powers, neither of my characters have powerful weapons. The weapons is more for the usual weapon they use, for example Mark would have simply his sword, custom made but lacking in the powers sector.
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her powers were hypnosis ant telepathy i dropped them.
ok I've altered the bio and changed the weapon.
ok I've altered the bio and changed the weapon.
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I still don't really get the recruiter thing. Do you mean to say that he came to buy that missle off of her and that sparked her intrest in the Titan Army?
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something like that. i just thought it was funny.
She is a money grubbing power crazy mix of Starscream and Swindle
She is a money grubbing power crazy mix of Starscream and Swindle
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Alright, that works for me, anyone else?
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I still have my problems but for the sake of the plot admin have, I will say approved.
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yusssss
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sorry but i have completely re done my titan kid
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Need more to the bio. make it a solid bio that flows (sentence-structure wise)
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done is it any good?
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In your bio, for his godly parent coming to him, I'm going to have to turn that down. They really aren't supposed to interfere (and we're gonna try to start cracking down on that), and they're supposed to be in America, so no foriegn visits. Please keep your character in America as well, it helps keep things together, and we want to avoid as many confusing accents as possible.
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ok can he still have the name? cause Marek means god of war.
I've dropped the godly visit to.
I've dropped the godly visit to.
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Yeah, names and heritage is fine, I suppose, so long as they're born in the US. (Admins- I think that's something else we need to start honing in on. : P) Looks good to me, any other admin input?
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All good to go.
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yes thanks
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