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Post  Fred Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:37 am

Name: Marek Novak
Age:16
God Parent: Kratos (Κράτος), spirit of strength, might, power and sovereign rule

Mortal Family: Anezka Novak mother Deceased
Vondra Novak sister

Years in Camp:0

Brief History:
Marek Novak was morn in Iowa and is of Czechoslovakian decent.
Kratos met Anazka while she was serving in the US army. they both fell in love and soon Marek was born.
after the child was born Kratos left and was never seen again
Marek was raised buy his sister Vonda a strong woman after
his mother was killed in a the 1st war in Iraq.
this destroyed Marek's belief system.
He became a history student in University of Hradec Králové and studied the way of chivalry and medieval warfare and became obsessed buy the code of honor.
This only lasted till his sister died in the recent war in Iraq.
he was left alone.
He found his sisters diary and discovered his Godly heritage.
Upon discovering his father was a god of war he blamed him for her death.
his rage and lust for vengeance upon the gods drew the titan army to him. Marek hates the Gods and believes they are not the true rullers and there time has come.

Physical Appearance: he is in tremendous physical shape. and will constantly strive to improve him self.
he has dark brown hair shaven into a Mohawk.

Personality: Marek is completely loyal to any cause he views as true. he is almost sycophantic in his loyalty.

Fatal Flaw: Marek's loyalty will blind him to others, his code of
honor will never allow him to act against his beliefs.

Talents: ironically Marek is a talented knitter and drummer.

Weapons: Flammar Zweihander named buřič firebrand
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/38/Flammar_Zweihander_by_Wendelin_Boeheim.jpg

Other:
Marek's body produces very little fatigue poisons allowing him to remain active for hours before tiring.

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Post  Kristina Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:26 pm

Definitely need more on the bio
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Post  Fred Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:50 pm

yeah i was a bit rushed i did it an the public library Very Happy
iv edited her now.
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Post  Wes Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:15 pm

In your bio, please include something about how she got recruited into the Titan Army.
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Post  Fred Thu Mar 15, 2012 4:07 am

done aaand done
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Post  Kristina Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:52 pm

Not to keen on the powers thing... and can you give more detail depth to the bio?
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Post  Fred Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:48 pm

in not sure what else more i can add?
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Post  GeneralArin Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:04 pm

I'd say the bio's mainly individual thoughts. If you could unify them more, it would work better.

What exactly are her powers? I think I missed it. I wasn't quite sure what the sword was supposed to do. If it does what I think it does, it's rather over powered. You know, you don't need a super cool weapon with powers, neither of my characters have powerful weapons. The weapons is more for the usual weapon they use, for example Mark would have simply his sword, custom made but lacking in the powers sector.
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Post  Fred Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:19 pm

her powers were hypnosis ant telepathy i dropped them.
ok I've altered the bio and changed the weapon.
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Post  Wes Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:27 pm

I still don't really get the recruiter thing. Do you mean to say that he came to buy that missle off of her and that sparked her intrest in the Titan Army?
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Post  Fred Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:36 am

something like that. i just thought it was funny.
She is a money grubbing power crazy mix of Starscream and Swindle
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Post  Wes Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:00 pm

Alright, that works for me, anyone else?
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Post  Kristina Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:37 pm

I still have my problems but for the sake of the plot admin have, I will say approved.
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Post  Fred Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:21 am

yusssss Very Happy
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Post  Fred Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:32 pm

sorry but i have completely re done my titan kid Razz
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Post  Kristina Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:22 am

Need more to the bio. make it a solid bio that flows (sentence-structure wise)
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Post  Fred Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:21 am

done is it any good?
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Post  Wes Mon Apr 09, 2012 4:57 pm

In your bio, for his godly parent coming to him, I'm going to have to turn that down. They really aren't supposed to interfere (and we're gonna try to start cracking down on that), and they're supposed to be in America, so no foriegn visits. Please keep your character in America as well, it helps keep things together, and we want to avoid as many confusing accents as possible.
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Post  Fred Tue Apr 10, 2012 1:39 am

ok can he still have the name? cause Marek means god of war.
I've dropped the godly visit to.
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Post  Wes Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:48 pm

Yeah, names and heritage is fine, I suppose, so long as they're born in the US. (Admins- I think that's something else we need to start honing in on. : P) Looks good to me, any other admin input?
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Post  Kristina Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:59 pm

All good to go.
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Post  Fred Wed Apr 11, 2012 1:43 am

yes thanks Twisted Evil
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